After uploading our thriller opening to youtube, we decided that we should get some feedback from our target audience. We decided to upload our thriller opening to Alicia's social media; Facebook as Alicia has many people on her Facebook that our thriller appeals to. Here are some of the comments that we received:
"Very good! I enjoyed watching."
"I loved the music, it is atmospheric."
"Loved this! I would say the boy seems like he is being interviewed etc, he needs to be a bit more relaxed, seriously well done!."
"I would say the first piece of music should've started before the first scene begins to create a relaxed atmosphere before the audience has a chance to make assumptions. I think their should've been a bigger pause between the second bit of text we see at the beginning and the first scene, as this allows the audience to really take in and think about what they just read."
"I couldn't understand what they were saying and I didn't get the sense of urgency at the situation. Acting is about embodying the characters - I think your actors needed a little more time to get into their characters."
"I loved the music, it is atmospheric."
"Loved this! I would say the boy seems like he is being interviewed etc, he needs to be a bit more relaxed, seriously well done!."
"I would say the first piece of music should've started before the first scene begins to create a relaxed atmosphere before the audience has a chance to make assumptions. I think their should've been a bigger pause between the second bit of text we see at the beginning and the first scene, as this allows the audience to really take in and think about what they just read."
"I couldn't understand what they were saying and I didn't get the sense of urgency at the situation. Acting is about embodying the characters - I think your actors needed a little more time to get into their characters."
Getting this feedback from our target audience is very important as it has allowed us to see things that are needing to be improved next time as we are continuously looking to improve it. I feel that we have learnt a lot during this experience of making the thriller and although it isn't perfect we know things that worked well and what didn't work well for next time. The target audience has been very important throughout the process of making our thriller and their opinion has been very important when evaluating our choices.
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